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Aug
06

This is my road map for Purple Roads.

I’ve begun to link the book together by scenes and characters. Anna is in the orange texta and Matt in the green. Every time they pop into another characters scene, I write their name in their colour so I can see straight away that they are involved in that section too.

Sounds confusing? Well actually it’s not and I’ve found that it’s the easiest way for me to write the book, without getting confused and forgetting what I had planned.

When I wrote Red Dust, I was writing blind. I didn’t think about trying to draw the whole book up on a few pieces of butchers paper. And I only used this method in the last half of Blue Skies, but, boy it made such a difference. It’s an easy reference guide.  I can just glance at the paper, looking for colour and I can follow it quickly and easily.

One of the benefits from meeting other authors is exchanging ideas. I’m really pleased I picked up and tried this one, because it’s working really well for me!

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Jul
13

On a beautiful Sunday morning the kids had the job of shifting a mob of sheep (I always go with them but hang right back or right at the front to slow the ewes down, so I’m there if they need help.)

Today they took their bikes and two dogs – Rocket, the Jack Russell, a well known sheep dog (um… or so Rochelle tells me! I beg to differ!) and the brand new pup called Buck, as in ‘Buckaroo’.

We got Buck late last week from the Kelpie Breeder, Nan Lloyd, and he is a going to be a tearaway! From the moment I picked him up, he barked, run, jumped, chewed and every other normal thing a puppy does, but he seems to do it with a lot more intent!

So as I sat in the warmth and comfort of my ute slowing the ewes down, the slave labour were out in the freezing cold on their bikes moving the sheep!

There were red noses, runny noses, dogs barking, fights and then making up, bikes running into each other and general chaos! All the while the sheep drifted along without much ado – they seemed to know they were off to a better paddock.

Buck showed off his skills as the new working dog, rounding the lambs up with their mums watching closely.

We all had a fabulous time this morning and one of the best bits was that I managed to write two chapters of Purple Roads, while all this was going on!

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Jul
05

Fiona and I met about two years ago. Rachael Treasure actually put us in contact! I think Fee and I were slightly over-awed that one of our favourite authors knew enough about both of us to think that we could be a good support network to each other.

And I think we have been. Being new to the publishing world, you really do need someone to go through it with. We’ve been able to talk about our experiences, celebrate good reviews together and make each other smile when we’ve had bad ones.

Fee’s book, The Family Farm, is a really great read. I enjoyed having my copy sent to me by a ‘real’ author, just as I’ve sent mine to her!

Anyway, without further ramblings, here’s Fee!

A big thanks to Fleur for having me guest blog.  I share a lot in common with Fleur; we are both country West Aussies and live close by.  Our first books were published in the same year just months apart and we both have terrific call stories.  Our journeys into writing have been very similar.

But I never had a set path for writing.  Not once did I ever think of becoming an author. Why?  Well my English sucked…to be frank.  I was one of those kids who couldn’t spell very well, had no idea on grammar and where oh where did comma’s go!?!  I do remember writing stories in high school and having a friend read it and say that was great, but when it came back from marking I’d failed miserably.  I guess I had a teacher who placed her emphasis on the proper English and nothing on the creative side.  So for me, even though I’d loved writing those stories, the constant bad marks made me doubt myself.  NOTE to those kids who are like me….you can do it!   (Besides, publishers have editors who check things like that.  Spelling can be fixed….creativity and a strong voice is harder to fix!)

And that is mainly how I got published and what definitely won me the ASA mentorship, my strong voice and the description of the countryside and the emotion (so they told me in my letter, anyway).

I love writing because I love telling stories.  My mind is always on the go and one day I decided to write down a story that had formed.  Yes, its hard getting to the computer and making yourself sit…but once I start typing, I get sucked into the world I have created.  Its just like sitting down to watch a movie when you laugh and cry in front of the TV screen….yes, I laugh and cry in front of my computer screen!!  (Please never come to my house unannounced or you could be in for a shock! Tissues and tears!)  Also because I am a busy mum I like books that are easy to read and make me happy.  There is something reassuring about knowing its all going to end well, hence why I love romance.  My books will never be without it!

The other thing that drives me is my passion for where I live…the country!  I wanted to share our way of life, I wanted people to read my books and experience a glorious sunset or sunrise, to feel the warm breeze on their face with the hint of eucalyptus and to have the stars in the sky spread over like a warm blanket.  Not saying I’m knocking city life, as I have lived in Perth, but I have the country in my soul.  It’s invigorating standing outside in the first rain of the year.  Maybe as life in the country depends so much on Mother Nature, you really are aware of her.  Find me a farmer that doesn’t talk about the weather and I’ll find a hat to eat!

Anyway, that’s some of the main reasons why I started to write.

Cheers everyone for dropping by and thanks again Fleur for having me.

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Jun
28

It’s been such a busy time for us recently, with seeding, sheep work and all sorts of other things on the go! It will be like this until after Christmas now with hay making, shearing and later, harvest.

We’ve been lucky enough to have good rains and everything seems to be on track for a good season.

The weather has been freezing and as you can see by this photo, the skies have been far from blue this week – although as I sit and write this, it’s shaping up for a cold but clear day!

I had a phone call from my publisher late Friday afternoon, asking if she thought I could be in Sydney by Wednesday for the ABIA awards. Red Dust is a finalist in the Newcomers/Debut section and oh, how I’d love to go – the powerhouses of the industry would be there along with the writers, the opportunities… the list goes on!

But after a hurried discussion and thoughts about what we have to do this week, I’ve been sad to decline the invitation. However, I really want to wish all of the A&U authors good luck – and there’s quite a few of them. Fellow WA author Craig Silvey is among them with his amazing book, Japser Jones.

Allen and Unwin themselves are up for the award of Publisher of the Year and I have to say after working with them for three years now, they deserve every award and accolade available. Allen and Unwin run their business thinking all their staff are ‘family’ and it shows. Everyone I have dealt with has been passionate, helpful and love what they do. I wouldn’t want to be anywhere else.

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Jun
21

Marketing your book is such a difficult thing.

We’re told that our publishing house will do it for us, but after an in-depth discussion with my publicist, a few other authors and watching ‘The Tuesday Book Club’s’ episode with Lee Child, Matthew Reilly, Bryce Courtney and Di Morrissey, I think we’ve all decided that authors have to be responsible for part of their own publicity/marketing.

Look at Craig Silvey’s amazing success with Jasper Jones. He has got into his own car and driven around WA talking at libraries, book clubs and so forth. His book came out the same time as Red Dust, did for me (May 09) and Jasper Jones is still in the Top Ten Bestsellers for Allen and Unwin. He’s done all that by himself (of course, he wrote a brilliant book as well.)

There is a difference between publicity and marketing. Lauren, who runs my marketing ‘campaign’ for want of a better word, told me once, the difference is: publicity is free, marketing you pay for.

Nyssa, who runs my website and is basically in charge of my ‘out of house’ marketing, is a uni student who is majoring in creative writing and media and also is a freelance web designer (Nixel Web Designs). Being young, having a passion for books (which means authors, as well!) and understanding all the technology we authors can make use of, she has a wealth of knowledge.

She also has a passion for fantasy and science fiction. She’s turned this into a website A Writer Goes On A Journey that is full of info, reviews and so on. But not content with that, she is the powerhouse behind a new association, Australian Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers, hoping to up and running before September.

One of the first things I remember Nyssa organising was a chat fest between many major USA agents, authors and publishers, which was run on her ‘A Writer’ website. We were able to ask questions through a ‘chat room’ (I’d never been in one before and found it quite amazing!).

So here’s Nyssa on marketing – but please do be aware: before you make any marketing decisions, do discuss it with your publishing house and read your contract.

Marketing is not a dirty word!

Every one of you holds a collection of unique cultural items, whether in your hands or in your head.  Whether bestseller or dreaming of it, you need a place of your own to express yourself. You need a website!

You don’t need to spend a lot of money. A domain name (the URL, the bit that is www.fleurmcdonald.com) can be as cheap as ten bucks a year, the hosting package (the server, where all the information is stored) can be $5/year. For an Australian company, try www.crazydomains.com.au, or if you don’t mind it being overseas, I personally use www.hostgator.com. Don’t buy a hosting package or server yet though!

What you do need is someone who knows websites. Do not ever use a family member or friend to make one for you. There are all sorts of social reasons for this, but if you want to present the best image of yourself, use a professional (and no, don’t even have your professional webdesigner best friend make your website for you).

Hiring someone doesn’t have to cost the earth. Use an open source program like Wordpress, which is free. It is what is known as a CMS – content management system. You don’t need to know HTML coding or design to be able to use it; it’s insanely easy to use. Some web developers design their own CMS, which means you are paying for their coding. The other great thing about using an open source CMS is that if you want to change designers or in the future want to update, there are lots of other people out there who can use the same program. You are not locked into only using one person for the rest of your web life.

You don’t have to pay thousands for a unique blog design either. With your webmaster/webmistress, you can find and purchase a nice theme and they can adapt bits of it to make it look completely unique, rather than coding and designing from scratch. You definitely never want to use the default theme that comes with the CMS you use.

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So that’s the basics of having a website, now what to do once you’ve got one?

Make a facebook fan page and twitter account. You can link them together so you don’t have to spend all your time on both. The facebook fan page gives you direct access to readers, and a twitter account gives you direct access to…well…everyone! This is useful even if you haven’t sold your book yet. Agents and publishers and editors use twitter too, but whatever you do, don’t force it down their throat. Just be natural and they will come to you. Of course, this is not the only thing you should do.

Get out there. Do interviews with your favourite authors on your website, or review books. Talk about your writing process. If your character is giving you a hard time, you’re not alone! If you are published, there is a new fabulous method of travelling the world on a book tour without leaving your desk or getting out of your pyjamas. It’s called a Blog Tour. You can either sign with a company or go on your own and offer to do interviews, giveaways, guest posts on a variety of different blogs.

Talk to reviewers and send out your book to them, don’t just rely on your publicist to do this. You won’t always get glowing praise, but that’s a part of being an author.

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Have any questions on websites or web marketing? Leave a comment here or go over to my business website, nixelweb.com!

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Jun
15

I was out about early this morning, helping Anthony fill the combine and getting ready for a day of replenishing the stocks in the pantry! It was very nippy and heavy dew left my fingers wet and cold, not willing to bend.

I had to shift some ewes and lambs as soon as it was light and while I was gently herding them towards the gate, the dew droplets glistened like diamonds covering the ground. You could see the tracks that the sheep have made during the mustering process as they’ve knocked off all the droplets.

When I got home, I found quite a few emails and Facebook comments saying: “congratulations!”, but I had no idea what everyone was on about! After a bit of research, I found out that Red Dust had been shortlisted for the Romantic Elements category of the Romance Writers of Australia’s Romantic Book of the Year! I had known this some weeks ago, but hadn’t been allowed to let on, and hence had forgotten about it!

Congratulations need to go to all the finalists, especially Bronwyn Parry, who is a fellow Australia Outback Romance and Mysteries author. Bron is a finalist in the same category as I am, for her blockbuster ‘Dark Country‘ , along with Katherine Scholes for the amazing and riveting ‘The Hunters Wife”  and Tracey O’Hara’s ‘Night’s Cold Kiss‘. I haven’t read any of Tracey’s books, but I know she has won numerous awards and has had rave reviews.

I understand that the R*BY awards are judged by readers, so I’m thrilled to think that some of you have taken the time to send your thoughts to the RWA – without you, none of this would have happened. After all, the readers are the ones that count!

I’m still in shock that I’m a finalist with such huge authors. Having read Bron and Katherine’s books and been captivated by them, I’m quite amazed that Red Dust is alongside their books.

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May
03

Well as some of you would know, I’ve just finished a whistle-stop tour in NSW.

Friday was my first day home and I’ve had a sharp jolt, back to reality! Back out feeding the cows as soon as the kids were on the bus, as we still haven’t had enough rain, to grow any grass.

But I thought I’d share, in a couple of blogs, some of the highlights of the tour.

I left the farm Monday night, flew to Perth, had a short stop-over there and then went on to Sydney, via the midnight horror flight! Despite the fact there was not very much sleep during the journey, I couldn’t contain the excitement that was building, for Tuesday morning, I was meeting my whole ‘team’, not just the girls from Allen and Unwin but my whole team.

So, as I disembarked, very bleary eyed, at 6:00am, the fact I wanted to keel over and sleep, didn’t stop me from walking very quickly down the ramp, in search of my publicist, Kate. For a brief moment, I was worried we wouldn’t recognise each other, or I wouldn’t be able to find her in the crowd, but there she was, right at the door as I walked into the terminal!

I was surprised that airport wasn’t busy. I thought you wouldn’t be able to walk for people, but there was plenty of room and everyone seemed to be fairly leisurely – not at all how I imagined it!

After coffee, much jumping up and down and squealing with excitment and a few hugs, we went to Circular Quay – wow! The Harbour Bridge and Opera House were amazing – having only seen them once before, I was captivated… especially when we drove over the bridge.

The Allen and Unwin offices were on a quiet, tree-lined street and to have a look around them was a real privilege, as was to meet a lot of the people I had names for, but no idea what they looked like.

Breakfast was fantastic. I met my agent, Gaby, who I had only ever spoken with on the phone, Nyssa, my amazing web-guru, Siobhan, my wonderful editor and friend, Louise, the woman I owe so much to, as she picked up my MS and who is my publisher, Lauren, my marketing ‘manager’ and the exceptionally capable Alice Grundy, who also Louises’ PA, but also managed to get the padlock off my bag, when I stupidly left the keys in the taxi!

The woman with the crazy pose pointing at all my book, in her office is my awesome publicist, Kate. She has spent the last three days looking after me, making sure I got to all the signings and so forth, on time, calming me down when I got too nervous and just organising everything. I was so lucky to have her with me, as I’m sure that nothing would have gone as smoothly if she hadn’t.

More coming up on where I’ve been – with more photos – soon!

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Apr
01

When I met Jeff through my writing cours, straight after I left school, I never realised what an impact he was going to have on my life.

I know the first few assignments for The Writing School I hadn’t put my best into and Jeff’s comments reflected that. Suddenly I became too busy to do something as ‘un-cool’ as writing and shelved the modules.

When I finally went back to it about five years ago, my writing must have matured because Jeff contacted me and said I really needed to try and do something with my writing. “You’re good enough to write a published novel,” he told me.

Jeff has been instrumental in my journey of writing.Whenver I’ve fallen by the way, he’s picked me up. He’s critiqued my work and offered nothing but strong and worthwhile advice. His teachings have also helped with me understanding the business of writing and how, even though I don’t have face to face contact with the publishing world, that I remain professional and business like. One of these rules is to write every day – I still don’t do that, but it’s something I’m working on!

It is very clear to me that I wouldn’t be where I am toda, without his help. I still never submit anything to Allen and Unwin without him reading it!

This is his story…

I was about 9 years old when I was first published!  I wrote a short piece about a funny incident on our farm and sent it off to a publishing house in London.  Imagine my astonishment when it appeared in a “fun” column in a national magazine and even more, imagine my astonishment when a cheque arrived!  I’m not sure if it was the cheque or the fact that it was published, but something triggered off a latent desire in me to write more.

At 14, I wrote an instruction book (freehand in one of my school exercise books) on how to carry out the various farm activities such as haymaking, ploughing, harvesting, etc., all of which were part of my life in those days.  I sent it off to Hodder and Stoughton, also in London, and to their everlasting credit, although they turned it down (they had to!) they did so very gently and sympathetically then asked to see any work I produced in the future.

Hodders have been one of my main publishers since that time and when I came to Australia in the 1960s, I literally transferred across to their Sydney office and became firm friends with their CEO and his publishing staff who have continued to publish many of my books.  Apart from an immeasurable number or articles and stories in magazines ( I was for a number of years editor of a national magazine) my current tally is 65 books  published here in Australia, in the USA, Britain, Canada, NZ and other English speaking countries.  My publishers, other than Hodders, include Angus & Robertson, MacMillans, New Holland, Reeds, David & Charles (UK), Ward Lock (UK) and a few smaller boutique publishers.

Although I had a brief fling with fiction for a few years in my early days, non-fiction is my preferred genre, probably because when I started to write seriously I was serving at sea as a navigating officer and I wrote travel stories about all the ports, places and people around the world which my ship visited.  When I swallowed the anchor (nautical term for leaving the service!) my writing blossomed and I was producing books and articles on a wide spectrum of subjects including travel, Australian history, sport, treasure trove, education, maritime affairs and maritime litigation.  I was at that time a consultant to the legal profession on maritime matters, which resulted in my spending much of my time in courts around the country.  I also ran a maritime business with sailing and navigation schools in Sydney, and as a maritime surveyor was instrumental in raising the historic barque “James Craig” from her watery grave in Tasmania.  After a $12m refit she is now fully restored as a working windjammer running tours and excursions out of Australian ports.

Throughout all these activities I continued to write and because I love teaching, I also tutored new writers through The Writing School, a branch of Lifestyle Learning Direct.  My pleasure in tutoring is in meeting budding new writers and helping them to get a start in the literary world.  I usually ask them to send me material they have written with a view to publishing and I then analyse it to see where I feel that particular student has potential.  I then suggest that either they take a course in basic writing skills in order to get a good grounding in the basics or, if I feel they are good enough to make a start, I coach them along through editing their work, pointing out where I feel they can improve or where, hopefully, they are already approaching the stage where they should submit work to a publisher or editor.

As far as picking a winner is concerned, I guess it is just intuition.  For example, when I first read a short story by Tim Winton (long before he wrote his first novel) I knew instinctively he was a brilliant writer and it was no surprise that he went on to be one of Australia’s finest novelists.  Not only does he write a good story but he has a way with words which only the lucky few ever achieve.

Another and more recent example is a lady I taught through a Writing School course.  She impressed me greatly with her writing ability.  When she finished her course, despite being a busy farmer’s wife and mother of two young children, she continued to produce very saleable material.  I was particularly taken with some of her short stories for children and suggested she contact a publisher.

Fleur McDonald is now one of the bright stars in the Allen & Unwin stable of new Australian writers.  I worked with her on her first novel “Red Dust” which, apart from being a huge success here, was also published in Germany.  A&U are one of Australia’s top publishers and they can’t get enough of her work.  With two more Australian novels in the pipeline she obviously has a very rosy literary future.  I am delighted and proud to have been Fleur’s mentor because I am certain that she is going to make a huge impact on the literary scene in this country in future years.

Jeff Toghill

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Mar
23

What a day! It was awesome! The Condy Fair really was brilliant this year – not that it hasn’t been other years, but there were so many people, so many things to do and just a fantastic atmosphere to the day.

A sharp thunderstorm the night before had our hearts in our mouths, but even though the day dawned with a very heavy fog, the coolness was welcome!

My friends Gill and Tiff (along with many others), worked so hard in the lamb tent with Vince Garreffa. I heard so many wonderful reports about the food that they produced and the way Vince worked. I wish I could have got down there, but I was kept rather busy at the Le Grand Bookshops stall!

So we launched Blue Skies into the wild ‘blue’ yonder! Jim and Joy Tucker from the bookshop were busy taking peoples orders for Blue Skies, if I wasn’t there and when I was I was busy signing them! It’s such a buzz to see that people enjoy your work – I still think that I might get found out one day; that I’m a fraud, when it comes to writing and no one really enjoys my books!

A pre-release Blue Skies is still available from Le Grand Bookshop and if you would like a personalised copy, call them on (08)9071 7829 and we’ll organise it for you!

The other piece of exciting news I have is that I have a two book contract after Blue Skies! (Still can’t believe it!) So, Purple Roads is on the go now and the forth one, well I guess I have a little bit of time to think about it!

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Mar
03

Meet Cal. She’s the brains behind Blue Skies.

When we first started talking about what the next book would hold, we came up with a few ideas.

1. Cal’s house is very old (it was actually the first double-brick home built on farming land in Esperance) and is steeped in history. I can’t remember the year, but she had a flood come though her house in the late 60’s that damaged her floor boards. That got us thinking about floods.

2. We were both set on the idea of twins.

3. There had to be a death! (We’re rather obsessed, Cal and I, with forensic science and bodies!)

4. We are both really interested in history – Cal in particular loves both family and Australian/English history. (Actually, any history!)

I tried to start writing but nothing was sitting right with me. We had planned out chapters, but it wasn’t coming together. I actually almost gave up and decided that it was a fluke I had got a book published and I couldn’t write anything, ever again!

After months of tearing my hair out, things finally began to click. But only after Cal had driven an eight hour drive to her sister’s place and spent the whole time planning a new direction for Amanda. She wasn’t going anywhere in her present form! When she got back from her holiday, we had numerious phone calls, lunches and emails and finally it began to take shape.

With Cal’s tough love: (“Get off the phone and start writing,”) she drew up a family tree for a family that didn’t exist to get the time lines right and right at the end, when I had about a month to go before my deadline, we sat down over lunch one day and planned the last ten chapters.

Blue Skies is as much her story, as it is mine.

My other friend, Gill, was also a huge reason that the book got finished!

Cal and I were pretty happy, last Friday, when we got to catch up and see our work finally finished and in book form.


To win a copy of Blue Skies, can you tell me what Amanda’s horrible job was at the dam? (Answer is in the first two chapters, which are available for download on the right.)

I’ll draw the winner on Sunday night and yes, I post anywhere in the world!

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